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hard news vs soft news assignment by Delanie

http://www.bbc.com/news/entertainment-arts-41720154 Director James Toback accused of sexual harassment. This article is on the BBC news  '' Director James Toback accused of sexual harassment ,'' This would  be hard news. This is definitely not the best thing he should be doing in his life because it is a very bad thing to be doing to other people ,  This headline  would not be causal , This story would really contain cold hard news about what is happening. This does not contain any soft news , There is a lot of basic information and quotations for the world to be aware of everything.  http://www.cnn.com/2017/10/20/us/puerto-rico-one-month-santiago/index.html How a month of hurricane nightmares changed Puerto Rico -- and me This article would be soft news because it is about a hurricane that happened in puerto Rico , this does go into depths on anything but it does cover a lot of issues because this could destroy peoples homes and anything they own

article assessment October 23

      Las Vegas Shooting This news is a big news has been in the eye with everyone since October 1st 2017 it was a big thing that Happened. This happened at a Jason Alden concert. i would give this rate a 4/4 There was a lot of people who were trapped at the concert because they had to lay on the ground so they wouldn't get shot, there was probabaly more than a thousand people that were at this concert. It was not only grabbed the attention of the people there it was grabbed by everyone in the world because everyone was so worried about everyone their. I would give this rate a 4/4 . The shooting in Vegas was a thing that no one new that it was going to happen they were all their to have a good night and listen to their Favoraite singer. we all prayed for the people at the concert that they would all be okay . I would rate this a 3/4 This Vegas shooting has prominence because their was a number of people of died and who go injured at the concert from the shoo

Writing the News Articles by Delanie Coughlan

The Community raises money for a little girls dream The little girl is very excited that she is going to have a new Playground at her house. the local of the community all came together and raised money so this little girl could have something she could play on at her home.   The family is really poor and they don't have much money to get the little girl what she really wants to have in life so the neighbors and the local decided that it would be a very good idea if they came together and got her a play ground.  The little girl went to school so while she was at school that thought that it would be a good thing to start it then . When the little girl got off the bus at 2 o'clock she noticed that there was a lot of cars in at her house she was wondering why they would be there . The little girl went into her house and said ''mommy why is there so many cars in our drive way.'' The mom said Hun come outside i have something to show you so the little girl

delanies news blog

http://www.miramichionline.com/post.php?id=5703    i am doing my news on a little 4 year old girl that was sexual assaulted by a boy that was only 12 years old this little girl was staying with him and his parents the little girl and her little brother and this boy had to share a room .  this took place 2 or 3 years ago but it just came out a year ago. no one knows why this had to happen to a little girl at that age. i know these people  really well and i think that this is a very sad thing that happened because i know the little girl very much and she did not deserve for that to happen to her when she was only 4 years old at the time. what all happened to her was "he touched her with his hands and also his bird". the little girl is so scared to talk about she will only talk about it with her mom and dad. # 2     in may 2015 there was a man that was sent to jail for 2 years because of possessing  methamphetamines the purpose of trafficking. we do not know why this