article assessment October 23




     

Las Vegas Shooting


This news is a big news has been in the eye with everyone since October 1st 2017 it was a big thing that Happened. This happened at a Jason Alden concert. i would give this rate a 4/4

There was a lot of people who were trapped at the concert because they had to lay on the ground so they wouldn't get shot, there was probabaly more than a thousand people that were at this concert. It was not only grabbed the attention of the people there it was grabbed by everyone in the world because everyone was so worried about everyone their. I would give this rate a 4/4 .

The shooting in Vegas was a thing that no one new that it was going to happen they were all their to have a good night and listen to their Favoraite singer. we all prayed for the people at the concert that they would all be okay . I would rate this a 3/4

This Vegas shooting has prominence because their was a number of people of died and who go injured at the concert from the shooter. I would give this a rate of 3/4 because i think that it is a very sad thing that this had to happen to these people .

This shooting in Vegas has appeals greatly to the people who were at the concert and who were injured. I would give this a 3/4


final marks 17/20


Dalhousie university 

  Timing 3/4 

I gave this a score out of three out of four because they posted the article about people parting and getting arrested , I would of gave it a bigger score if they had of put it on the day if happened or the following day. 

Significance 2 / 4 

I gave this a two out of four because i thought that there wasn't very much affect because it was only hurting the people who was their.

Proximity  3/4 

I would give this a three out of four because i think that it would be really interesting for some people to read because people will know what their school is like. 


Prominence   4/4 

I would give this a four out of four because i thought that the university students would be pinpointed in this article but they are not going to be pointed out in the huge world we have around us. 


Human Interest  3/4 

i would really be willing to give this a three out of four because i thought that some people who will be reading the article will be very interested in this and their will be some people who are not, There was not life or death in this situation.


final marks 15/20 











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