Writing the News Articles by Delanie Coughlan




The Community raises money for a little girls dream
The little girl is very excited that she is going to have a new Playground at her house. the local of the community all came together and raised money so this little girl could have something she could play on at her home. 

  The family is really poor and they don't have much money to get the little girl what she really wants to have in life so the neighbors and the local decided that it would be a very good idea if they came together and got her a play ground. 

 The little girl went to school so while she was at school that thought that it would be a good thing to start it then . When the little girl got off the bus at 2 o'clock she noticed that there was a lot of cars in at her house she was wondering why they would be there . The little girl went into her house and said ''mommy why is there so many cars in our drive way.'' The mom said Hun come outside i have something to show you so the little girl started to get excited. 

 When the little girl went outside she seen all the people stand beside a big play grounded . the little girl was so full of excitement she couldn't believe that she had her very own play grounded . '' I never had anything like this before I cant believe that I have my own to play own''. 
The family could not believe that the neighbors and the local would ever do that for their little girl that were so happy for the little girl that she finally had something to do at home other than watching TV because she didn't have that much toys to play with like other kids in the world would have. The family thanked everyone a thousand times for doing such a big thing for them. 

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